Avens Dolor

Flapper. Golden skin and trademark white/silver dress. Hair is dark and bobbed. Believes strongly in women's suffrage and other women's rights. Opinionated. Quick temper. Always speaks her mind. Hugo

Basically, writing is all about arranging thoughts on paper: + Arranging related words creates sentences. + Arranging related sentences creates paragraphs. + Arranging related paragraphs creates chapt

YWS doesn't try to claim copyrights, which is a very important point. Also, if you post something here and then have it published, you can PM Nate and ask for ...

Hi MJ! Welcome to YWS. Let me know if you're ever looking for a critique--I'd be more than happy to oblige. What genre of writing do you cover?

Hi Niccy! So what's Scars about?

----------- This is the story of a selfish but quite average man, and a less-than-average girl with a n annoyingly peppy personality. Nice opener! This is one of the few ...

I saw that you didn't get any critiques and thought that I might help out! Comments in red. ------- Once upon a time there lived a beautiful princess named Arabelle. ...

Comments in red. ------------ It's been quite a while since I've come down this path. Good opener. The familiarities have left, the old blades of grass stretching out in triumph ...

Comments in red. ------------ This is a story about a time when nothing meant everything and everything meant nothing. Not bad, but this feels a little like one of those ...

Welcome to YWS, Bishop! If you're ever in need of a writing critique, just drop me a line. Keep in mind all of the pointers that other members have already ...

Hello and welcome! If you ever need a writing critique, just let me know. I'd be more than happy to oblige. I can also help you out around YWS if ...

Aw, those are adorable! I can see that you have a very steady hand--your lines are so clean! The horse, especially, is beautiful. Avens

Post edited: This makes me a little bit sad, but rather relieved to tell you the truth. I've shut down the website, mostly because it was such a time drain ...

Hello all! I love reviewing, but I when I scan the forums I'm always terrified that I'll give a tough critique to someone who isn't quite ready for it. When ...

Comments in red. “No, don’t hurt me period or semicolon I didn’t do anything to hurt you! Please don’t hurt me! Close quote. Also you say "hurt" an awful lot ...